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5/9/2025 for Choose a Line Poetry Contest sponsored by Joseph May

A Soft Embrace

Deep in the desert, on a desolate trek,
in the distance trudges a lonely speck.

Lost, not knowing where, in this life, he's bound,
he has never known the comforting sound

of a tender voice, or a loving word.
His unsure eyes see only visions, blurred.

What looks like water, is just a mirage,
while apparitions form his entourage. 

So, how, on this rocky beach in Malibu
did this man, on that day, discover you,

where surf crashed and he gazed in your face,
and "the silence faded with a soft embrace?"
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Goldsmith Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 9:32 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day with your win.......
Crandall Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 3:44 PM
Thanks Paula!
Crandall Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 3:44 PM
Thanks Paula!
Crandall Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 3:44 PM
Thanks Paula!
May Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 3:22 PM
Congrats on your win David, Very nicely done
Crandall Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 3:44 PM
Thanks Joseph - I enjoyed the contest!
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