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A

Sneeze

to

Spring

A Sneeze To Spring

It started with a sniffle one March morn’
When on my car that telltale film appeared
And I knew well this coat it had not worn
For overnight the gleam had disappeared

The grasses and the grains had sprung to life
A tease from leprechauns I do suspect
So thick this film I’d need a carving knife
To find that pristine wax now olive flecked

The wheezing, sneezing found its way to me
As in spring air the pollen count raged strong
Though I’d professed to be allergy free
Friends had predicted this might come along

A strong immune will carry just so far
For late in life hay fever can be born
And not again will I wax my white car
Till fall’s first frost has kissed summer’s last corn
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Chiri Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 7:32 PM
Carolyn congrats on your win!;)
Gauthier Avatar
June 15, 2019 at 6:26 PM
Lovely, Carolyn. Congrats on your win.
Kiser Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 6:20 PM
Very well penned; great imagery; enjoyed the peaceful read.
Sergi Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 3:07 PM
Hi Carolyn: You have excelled in use of this form. My compliments!
Awtry Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 8:40 AM
I came looking for your poetry as I was missing you. I don't know if hay fever has ever been given such honor! Enjoyed this fun piece. Blessings :)
Rushing Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 8:11 PM
Just stopping by to say I miss you! Hope all is well my dear friend!
One Avatar
May 6, 2019 at 2:58 PM
Not seen you in a while. I hope you are ok.
Ball Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 5:07 AM
Love this Carolyn. Have missed you. I been here and then gone too. Sort of on again off again with health problems. Great stuff here. God Bless, JB
Devonshire Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 7:49 AM
I'm with you and the on-and-off health issues. Hope you are well when I return to Soup so we can interact, Judy!
Proxenos Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 1:27 PM
Hi Carolyn, have not seen you around and really miss your comments and making them! I suffer with hayfever almost constantly, it is obviously more rife at the change of every season, but has a lot has to do with pollution also. A delightful poem Carolyn and so true, I think hay-fever has become a world wide complaint! Blessings, Jennifer.
Devonshire Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 7:48 AM
I have a mild case of the sniffles from the pollen, but some people suffer terribly, Jennifer. I hope to be back on the Soup soon! Hugs, Carolyn
Messina Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 10:42 AM
Aww, hope you are feeling better Carolyn. I'm not sure if I ever did have hay fever but if I had I didn't know it..lol Best wishes for win. Had a nice Easter...hoping you did as well...Hugs Charlie
Nau Avatar
April 13, 2019 at 1:11 PM
You made me laugh and wheeze and sneeze with you. The yellow dust is like hands on the clock for me to get out the Singular, and inhalers. Argh! Love spring but just want to breath. This was so fun and so true. Congratulations.
Lindley Avatar
April 13, 2019 at 9:45 AM
When young I suffered not such allergies now that I am old I do. Your verses so wondrously crafted are a delight and a great description of one of Spring's hazards. A gem and a great fav, too.
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 6:28 PM
Just wanted to say hello while I am catching up here. And While i am here, CONGRATS for the win
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 4:06 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win Carolyn. I am trying to catch up...I lost my voice but am getting better slowly. I hope you are well hugs, Connie
Hagy Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 9:36 PM
What a picture! :0... This is a cute and clever write Carolyn...in late spring where I am cotton from trees sticks to everything like snow :0...break out the antihistamine! :)
Canerdy Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 8:40 PM
I'm back with CONGRATS, Carolyn! Janice
Haight Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 8:39 PM
Wow, very creative, and perfect Iambic Pentameter! Loved your take on the theme. Yes, that pollen can be dreadful! Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
Devonshire Avatar
March 27, 2019 at 9:52 AM
Thanks, Sandra. I had fun with this one. Wrote it very quickly.
Allison Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 8:10 PM
what an unique take on the spring theme Carolyn we sure know when its here when we hear folk sneezing and the pollen is everywhere!:-( hugs Jan xx
Roberts Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 7:17 PM
oh this made me laugh , my car is parked under trees and looks covered this time of year as well, many congrats on your win dear Carolyn
Devonshire Avatar
March 27, 2019 at 9:51 AM
So nice to see you back here, Francine. I'm not active here at the moment, but hope to return soon. Having some health issues.
Pinet Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 6:45 PM
Congratulations Carolyn! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. This contest was very tough to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
Devonshire Avatar
March 27, 2019 at 9:53 AM
Thank you, Emile. I do understand how hard it is to judge contests and am always grateful when I place in one.
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 1:07 AM
awesome creativity, Carolyn. the cute story telling in rhyme was just perfect. oh boy, i will never catch up here.
Messina Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 10:10 PM
Oh, that darn hay fever. Your pen is overflowing with excellence. Great write, Carolyn. Best wishes for a win. Charlie
Onclaud Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 9:01 AM
carolyn, wow... this delightful piece on spring glides despite the pollen invasion which i am so allergic to...thanks likewise for your fulfilling 'green' challenge!.. huggs
Callus Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 4:19 AM
Your poem is a work of delightful creativity, Carolyn. All seasons, even the ones we love most,visit with unwanted 'gifts'. Luckily I don't suffer from such allergies, though the rest of my family all do! Hope you are keeping well. Hugs // paul
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March 23, 2019 at 9:43 PM
Lovely, we are getting a few inches of snow tonight, this is no longer winter, is harassment!!! LOL
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