Home » Poems » Chris Green » A Smile In a Dandelion Seed

A Smile In a Dandelion Seed

~

I sent you a smile
on a dandelion seed,
gently it floated the air

Hoping its touch
would be what you need,
coming from one who did care

And as it danced
close to your heart
while you were drying a tear

Know that it meant
though we are apart,
I will forever be near

~

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Hello There

Date: 11/5/2019 10:47:00 PM

A beautiful sentiment, Chris ~ very sweet :)

Chris Green
Date: 11/6/2019 7:45:00 AM

Thank you my friend. I am happy you liked this

John Lawless

Date: 11/5/2019 7:02:00 AM

and the offspring in the spring just keep on smiling....

Chris Green
Date: 11/5/2019 7:34:00 AM

That they do! :) Thanks so much John.

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/4/2019 8:19:00 PM

Lovely, Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 11/5/2019 7:33:00 AM

Thank you Line. :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/4/2019 7:48:00 PM

I love this great poem of dedication. ! A favorite :)

Chris Green
Date: 11/5/2019 7:33:00 AM

Thank you so much Heidi. I am happy you liked this one.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/4/2019 7:19:00 PM

Hope in the nascent seed :)

Chris Green
Date: 11/5/2019 7:33:00 AM

At least a smile. : ) Thanks Kim

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/4/2019 7:09:00 PM

What a delicate, yet simultaneously enduring image you've created: 'a smile on a dandelion seed,' so pregnant with meaning (sorry about the cliché there, ahem). Just gorgeous written, Chris. ~ Smiling away

Chris Green
Date: 11/5/2019 7:32:00 AM

Thanks my friend. No worries about the cliche, your comments always give birth to a smile on my face. :)

Beautiful Scars

Date: 11/4/2019 3:52:00 PM

awwww! How simple and sweet- romance and emotion. Beautiful as always dear man x:)-luloo

Chris Green
Date: 11/4/2019 4:21:00 PM

Thanks so much Luloo. I appreciate your visit and kind words today

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/4/2019 3:42:00 PM

Wow. So you are the one who sent that dandelion wish at me? I actually had one floating in front of me dancing... it touched my heart then floated slowly away. We have no dandelions left it was touching but not as touching as the beauty of your poem. ... this just wows me... it is amazing and beautiful ... you my friend have a wonderful soul ... hugs

Chris Green
Date: 11/4/2019 3:49:00 PM

Who me? Thank you Sandy, I am thrilled you enjoyed this one so much. Now, make a wish. : )