A Slow Fast

For reasons that I do not know,
A fast is never fast, but slow.
I check, but still have hours to go 
And hope that I’ll get through it.

I missed the bagel that I’d eat,
The cheese and fruit, sliced up and sweet,
Plus cake to make the meal complete,
With coffee, once I’d brew it.

A yogurt here, some popcorn there,
Perhaps some grapes or, if I’d dare,
Dark chocolate, maybe just a square;
It’s tempting to say, “Screw it!”

But no, I’ll keep on with my fast 
And soon, my waiting will have passed.
When sundown comes, I’ll say, at last,
“ I knew that I could do it!”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Wolf Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 9:48 PM
Ilene, you are a better Jew than I. I can't do it anymore. My doctor said 'You shouldn't, Gershon,' but he didn't order me not to fast. Therefore, I am not exempt. And I just can't even come close. The shame I feel is enormous - especially since I do my best to fulfill ALL the other commandments. So, my hat is off to you. Way to go!! :) Gershon
Bauer Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 12:12 PM
Hey Gershon! Aside from fasting and lighting Chanukah candles (okay, and observing Passover), I don’t do much else to fulfill any commandments. Don’t feel bad about not fasting - most people I know who are “seniors” no longer feel that they can do it. Thanks for your support and L’Shana Tova!
Delegans Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 9:15 PM
You hit the nail on the head! It gets tougher the older I get too. The negotiation, you outlined perfectly, is very real and everyday for me lol. Nicely done, Ilene.
Bauer Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 12:13 PM
Much appreciated, Christopher! I think everything seems tougher as we get older…
M  Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 3:02 PM
Hehe….love it ilene…especially the first two lines! You are a better woman than me….l have no willpower when it comes to food so l just say ‘Screw it’ and eat! Enjoyed another ilene daily tale…love them my friend! Debx
Bauer Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 12:16 PM
Always a pleasure to hear from you, Deb! Thanks for taking the time to do so…
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