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~ 1st Place~
Contest:  Pick A Title, Vol 13 - Lyric
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh  ~ 1st Place

For The Contest, "My Song," Sponsor, Jerry T. Curtis  ~ NA

A Sliver of Nirvana


Oh, Wintertime with weathered hue
   of leafless trees and faded lawns;
      the sting of cold with biting winds,
much shorter days and dreary dawns-

Oh, Winter, with your weathered hue-
      I share my winter blues with you.

As I, behind this window, stand-
   observe this season that holds sway,
      I'm filled with ashen, Winter gloom
that buried Autumn's lovely stay.

Oh, Winter, with your weathered hue-
      I share my winter blues with you.

But, now I see your snowflakes fall
   to quickly transform grays to white!
      Your blanket gleams below blue skies-
becomes white satin neath moonlight.

Oh, Winter, hide your weathered hue-
      whitewash my winter blues with you.

Uplifted by your pristine snow- 
   the bright sun beaming off its glaze,
      I know that dormant Spring will rise-
a sliver of nirvana splays.

Oh, Springtime will bring life anew-
      and I will share in rebirth too.
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Ibeh Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 4:07 PM
Please forgive me for commenting on this gem 4 months late! I was sick as a dog when I judged this contest, lol Excellent poem, Sandra:-)
Andresen Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 1:12 PM
- Back with congratulations, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 4:52 PM
Sandra, great imagery , congratulations sweet lady on your win. Hugs Eve
Devonshire Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 4:08 PM
You have captured the beauty of winter as well as the sadness that comes when autumn's last leaves fall. Amazing writing, Sandra! Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn (Everyone here is excited because it's so cold -- 54 degrees. LOL)
Haight Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 5:41 PM
Thank you, Carolyn, for your uplifting and positive comments! I appreciate them very much. Hugs, Sandra
Andresen Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 2:10 PM
- Beautifully written in letters of silver, Sandra :) - Good luck in the contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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