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A Sliver of Nirvana

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Oh, Wintertime with weathered hue of leafless trees and faded lawns; the sting of cold with biting winds, much shorter days and dreary dawns- Oh, Winter, with your weathered hue- I share my winter blues with you. As I, behind this window, stand- observe this season that holds sway, I'm filled with ashen, Winter gloom that buried Autumn's lovely stay. Oh, Winter, with your weathered hue- I share my winter blues with you. But, now I see your snowflakes fall to quickly transform grays to white! Your blanket gleams below blue skies- becomes white satin neath moonlight. Oh, Winter, hide your weathered hue- whitewash my winter blues with you. Uplifted by your pristine snow- the bright sun beaming off its glaze, I know that dormant Spring will rise- a sliver of nirvana splays. Oh, Springtime will bring life anew- and I will share in rebirth too. January 20, 2020 ~ 1st Place~ Contest: Pick A Title, Vol 13 - Lyric Sponsor: Edward Ibeh Theme Chosen: 1) A Sliver of Nirvana Judged: 02/11/2020

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Date: 5/17/2020 4:07:00 PM
Please forgive me for commenting on this gem 4 months late! I was sick as a dog when I judged this contest, lol Excellent poem, Sandra:-)
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Date: 2/12/2020 1:12:00 PM
- Back with congratulations, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/11/2020 4:52:00 PM
Sandra, great imagery , congratulations sweet lady on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/20/2020 4:08:00 PM
You have captured the beauty of winter as well as the sadness that comes when autumn's last leaves fall. Amazing writing, Sandra! Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn (Everyone here is excited because it's so cold -- 54 degrees. LOL)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/27/2020 5:41:00 PM
Thank you, Carolyn, for your uplifting and positive comments! I appreciate them very much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/20/2020 2:10:00 PM
- Beautifully written in letters of silver, Sandra :) - Good luck in the contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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