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A Sky Painted In Silence

not a single bird chirped in trees nor did the winds whisper to me clouds passed by with no refrain twilight's sky but a noiseless sea no crickets to announce eventide nor did waves crash on the beach the stars spoke not a single word tho it seemed they were in reach bleak hues of black existed there in the voiceless world's reticence once you left you took my sound leaving me a sky painted with silence

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Date: 1/1/2022 11:04:00 AM
Hello John Gilman, as I read this beautiful poem, I can vision the scene before me. It will be my fav, Enjoy your day my friend D.De.B.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/2/2022 11:06:00 AM
Hello John ,I am very proud of you. This poem is so beautiful. I made it my fav. 3 ribbons something to be proud of. Yes I do like it my friend.
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John Gilman
Date: 1/1/2022 5:51:00 PM
Thank you so much! This is a fav of mine. Written a few months ago, it did well on the other site I belong to. Something like 6 top 3 ribbons and was featured as one of their special front page picks. So, I am very, very pleased that you liked it, my friend!

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