Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

A Sky In My Mind

by Michael J Falotico

                                       My mind is a sky that holds scattered weather..
                                    It warms my insides on days when we're together..
                                On empty days the rain comes down and clouds my eyes..
                                   The thunder is so loud that no one can hear my cry's..
                                      Angry moments send chills like a cold winter day..
                                Soon after your back in my scene with your tender ways..

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Sara Kendrick April 9, 2011 at 4:35 PM Very descriptive and expressive work..Enjoyed..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta April 9, 2011 at 9:09 AM You have always romantic thoughts with romantic things and images, Michael. Always enjoy your verses

Wandering Butterfly April 9, 2011 at 6:47 AM This reminds me of my aunt and uncle's first dance song, "Two sparrows in a hurrricane" by tanya tucker... this should've been a verse in that song...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 8, 2011 at 4:18 PM Wonderful to have a loving heart to be there always in your life.. we share that gift with our spouses Michael and your words leap off the page into my heart ... amazing as always luv.. so nice to see my White Knight again.. your Jersey Girl forever and always luv..

Carolyn Devonshire April 8, 2011 at 4:10 PM Only the strongest relationships can withstand the stormy weather, Michael. Guess most couples have their angry moments, but at least you have fun making up, right? Love, Carolyn