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A Sketch

Hibiscus drooped, sheds Petals in the gust of rain ... A broken heart dies Swallows swivel rain Above water stifled grass .. . Memories of joy Light covers the earth And dust make rainbows appear ... I am that poem Sky and tablecloth of stars.

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/25/2012 6:22:00 PM

Wow. This is beautiful inside and out. Thanks for sharing! (: Always, Laura

Jared Pickett

Date: 4/25/2012 10:29:00 AM

The impact you had with your beautiful verses.. Well done my friend..:JP}

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/25/2012 5:35:00 AM

Hi David...such a lovely sketch form...I can see each of these scenes and the last one is grand...I like to see God's designs painted by your poetic hand. :) Gwendolen