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A Silly Rhyme

Please can I borrow Until tomorrow A shiny silver shilling I promise I will pay it back If my willpower is still willing

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/3/2020 11:51:00 PM

I like the way you have sneakily qualified this, Shirley.

Shirley Hawkins
Date: 7/5/2020 9:35:00 PM

Thank You, Caren

Shirley Hawkins
Date: 7/5/2020 9:34:00 PM

Thank You, Caren

Rico Leffanta

Date: 6/23/2020 3:01:00 PM

Who would pay back a silver shilling in these trying times? But clever verse! Aloha! Rico

Shirley Hawkins
Date: 6/24/2020 7:26:00 PM

G/Day Rico, Many would not be able to loan it in the first place, sadly. Best Wishes... Shirley

Jenish Somadas

Date: 6/23/2020 1:31:00 AM

lovely rhyme.. lol.. willpower is still willing...

Shirley Hawkins
Date: 6/24/2020 7:36:00 PM

Thank you Jenish. Willing but not sure if she is able .... lol Stay safe and well ...Shirley