A Sight To Behold

Hummingbird feeding
on droopy, purple blossom...
no escape for bugs.


Entered in Raul Moreno's contest,
" Daily Ritual "
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 9:29 PM
I thought it was a hummingbird, but then again, I know nothing of birds. Maybe hummingbird is type of sparrow? that last line is funny! thanks for your welcome comment today. LUv, andrea
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April 26, 2010 at 12:19 PM
nice one well described,..p.d.
Murphy Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 12:19 PM
very nice good luck in the contest very good entry well done have a great day faleshia
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