A Sigh Feeling

I'm feeling i'm not feeling
when I go thinking
my mind goes reiling
will I realize
will I even care
will I be penalized
for what I fear
theres no resolving this
minds in a mist
can't get passed this
help me to exist
theres something missing
life passing me by
feel some resisting
time is slipping
please tell me why
minds a sceeming
here I lye
bleeding
as I die
for what reason
I sigh.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 29, 2010 at 10:05 AM
Jennifer this is a deep write and I like it,, a good imagery this is the ending is a good flow to it,, enjoyed,..p.d.
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