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7/9/2023

Anxious, i started getting dressed, feeling great and on my way to visit a friend few blocks away. I hopped on my new mountain bike and zoomed down on a downhill not so busy street near by our small town. It always gives me a thrill to ride as fast, passion such. Feeling the air rush past me with the lightest of touch. On the sidewalk, a group of friends were laughing together. I heard one of them yell, "Where are you going Heather." I turned my back, I waved and let out a small giggle. In moments, off and over a parked car. I did niggle. As I laid sprawled out behind its rear bumper, my friends ran over giggling. " You're a great jumper. My pride was bruised, though I made an effort not to show. It was like being ran over by a speeding train, you know.

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Date: 7/13/2023 10:22:00 AM
Haha, it's lovely.. You penned it so well, I truly enjoyed reading it. I hope you are well.. Would you be so kind to check soup mail please..? Blessings!
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Date: 7/9/2023 10:20:00 PM
Dear, dear Eve. You worry me if you drive a bicycle like that. You should always look ahead. But I know this is fiction. And what a write with so fine details. Hus. xxx
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Date: 7/9/2023 4:49:00 PM
Your poem, Eve, is exquisitely crafted. I thoroughly appreciate the meticulous attention to detail evident in your rhyming and rhythm. Additionally, the breathtaking imagery you have employed adds a layer of sophistication and grace to your work.
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Date: 7/9/2023 3:46:00 PM
I remember embarrassing moments like that in my day. And even until now. haha. Good one, Eve
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Date: 7/9/2023 11:48:00 AM
I enjoyed your fun/write/story. Have a blessed day....................
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Date: 7/9/2023 5:23:00 AM
So adorable! love it - God bless you friend. Love, Gina
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