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A Shot

a shot -- one of the porch chairs stops rocking

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/9/2012 5:52:00 AM
Congratulations Charles xx
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Date: 11/8/2012 11:39:00 PM
Hey, Congratulations, stranger!!! (rarely see you any more)
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Date: 11/8/2012 3:08:00 PM
strong modern haiku Congrad's on Your Win! Light & Love
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Date: 11/8/2012 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Charles. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/5/2012 8:13:00 AM
So much said, so little written.
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Date: 11/4/2012 6:47:00 AM
short and sweet put the -- so everyone can see and think ahhh this is the juxtaposed bit of sensory input!! good have have it be sound too instead of another image ;) Light & Love
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