A Shot

a shot --
one of the porch chairs
stops rocking
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 9, 2012 at 5:52 AM
Congratulations Charles xx
Dietrich Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 11:39 PM
Hey, Congratulations, stranger!!! (rarely see you any more)
Guzzi Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 3:08 PM
strong modern haiku Congrad's on Your Win! Light & Love
Brown Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 8:24 AM
Congratulations on your win Charles. Love, Carol
Collins Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 8:13 AM
So much said, so little written.
Guzzi Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 6:47 AM
short and sweet put the -- so everyone can see and think ahhh this is the juxtaposed bit of sensory input!! good have have it be sound too instead of another image ;) Light & Love
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