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A Shooting Star

flashes in the night white-hot it falls to the ground black, the spot it held

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/14/2010 3:34:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today J B. I am looking forward to tomorrow and what I might read of yours again. Never let your pen lay and dry out. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/14/2010 5:12:00 AM
enjoyed reading your work! Great senryu!
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