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A Ship of Dreams

Close your eyes real tight squeeze them just right relax all your will then, breathe to refill the ship of your soul so it reaches your goal the out-of-body way a spaceship for today to take you out in the stars away beyond Mars as the cosmic winds bend and roar when you descend back to your body once more. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~for Matt Caliri's contest "How To Build a Spaceship"

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2010 1:12:00 PM

So you did it the out of body experience way. If I could learn that way and master it, I"d be in heaven!!! Congrats. (just now finally getting around to seeing all the winners of this particular contest!) Luv,Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/21/2010 11:04:00 AM

An out-of-body space voyage sounds like just what I need, Sue. This is very creative and well done. Congratulations on your success in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/21/2010 8:39:00 AM

What a wonderfully, and creative twist to the contest, Sue!! Congratulation on your win!!~ Carrie

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/21/2010 6:14:00 AM

Well yes Sue! Who'd a thunk it?! Such green tech and cost effective as well! Cool! I like your choice of intergalactic travel......... sssskk...".the seat belt sign is off.. you are free to walk about the cabin".sssskk. :)-Robert

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/21/2010 4:44:00 AM

Congrats Sue on your winning poem in Matt's spaceship contest.. great write and well deserved win.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/21/2010 3:41:00 AM

Congratulations Sue, on your success in Matt Calari’s “How to Build a Spaceship” contest with this imaginative poem. Your creative skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/26/2009 1:09:00 PM

I'm with you ASTRAL PROJECTION.....wheeeeeeee Light & Love

Sara Lokken

Date: 12/26/2009 1:09:00 PM

This is quite unusual. I feel astral when I'm doing anything with music:D.....very otherwordly. Best wishes, Sara

Brian Strand

Date: 12/26/2009 1:17:00 AM

Hi Sue ,Saw you blog comment.Not sure who Michael used but your could try lulu.com in the states.I have self published using a local printer in Oxford ,everything being digital these days it is quite cheap/easy to do for small quatities say 25 off.No doubt there maybe some similar print houses in your locality.Go for it either way.Rgds Brian

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2009 8:09:00 PM

Oh, I see you just responded on that acrostics for new year, so now i am seeing your entry to the spaceship contest. It's a good one!! Best of luck. Luv, andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/25/2009 6:42:00 PM

Oh Sue I luv this entry... good luck and what a winner already.. great couplet message.. my entry is 3..2..1.. Liftoff if u care to read.. thankxxx for your wonderful and inspiring comments on my poetry today on this very special day... blessings... luv... with appreciation.. Linda-Marie..

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/24/2009 1:17:00 PM

Love this!!! What a wonderful twist to the contest, Sue! ~ Merry Christmas! ~ Love, Carrie