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A Senryu - Tanka - Dedicated To Paul Callus

dedicated to Paul Callus
it never will be enough
my mere sorry 

a village pump
quenched many thirsty children
hot summertime days
water pumped from mother earth
Paul Callus still remembers

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Paul Callus

March 28, 2018 at 5:21 PM

I'm lost for words, Mick!! Thank you for the dedication, but you have no need to say sorry, my friend. A contest is a contest, and I've had my fair share of NAs! As Tom said, "you were brave to take those contests on." Keep up your good work! Best regards...and a Happy Easter! ~ paul

Mick Talbot

March 29, 2018 at 12:30 AM

Hi Paul, I feel I do, as I move it to the second shortlist and for reasons unknown I overlooked it and it didn't get to the final shortlist. My thanks four your understanding, and wishing you a happy easter too... Mick

Tom Cunningham

March 26, 2018 at 8:43 AM

A lovely dedication to another great poet. Tom

Tom Cunningham

March 26, 2018 at 3:58 PM

Don't beat yourself up Mick, we all make mistakes in life, we're only human after all.I'm sure Paul realises that too.I think you were brave to take those contests on. Tom

Mick Talbot

March 26, 2018 at 12:23 PM

It is really is me saying sorry for overlooking his haiku in one of my contests. I feel a right prat :-(

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