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A Secret Lay

She skipped across the rainy day
   Tucked in her raincoat a secret lay

A young man's kiss had tickled her heart
   She'd shyly smiled ~ True Love's start

Copyright © Gershon Wolf | Year Posted 2019

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October 2, 2019 at 8:56 PM

Your title caught me eye, lol superb!!

October 2, 2019 at 9:14 PM

Now, Bobby... Hope you weren't too disappointed there, my friend. LOL. Best wishes, Gershon

October 2, 2019 at 6:16 PM

Oh yes, that first love, heart quickens and a permanent smile...nice write Gershon.

October 2, 2019 at 6:44 PM

Ah, you remember... Hey, even I remember, and nobody's ever accused me of being over-sentimental lately... Thanks, Jeanne. ~ Gershon

October 2, 2019 at 4:53 PM

Gershon this is just precious! Simple yet elegant! You have wowed me again and brought my smile right back!;)

October 2, 2019 at 5:07 PM

Now we are both smiling, Brenda. Thank you so much for your genuine enthusiasm for this simple write! :) gw

October 2, 2019 at 3:54 PM

Cute my friend. There is nothing better than young love.

October 2, 2019 at 4:28 PM

You're so right. Young love is so innocent, so pure. The less complicated love is, the better! Thank you so much, Gershon

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