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A Secret Lay

She skipped across the rainy day Tucked in her raincoat a secret lay A young man's kiss had tickled her heart She'd shyly smiled ~ True Love's start

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Date: 10/2/2019 8:56:00 PM

Your title caught me eye, lol superb!!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/2/2019 9:14:00 PM

Now, Bobby... Hope you weren't too disappointed there, my friend. LOL. Best wishes, Gershon

Date: 10/2/2019 6:16:00 PM

Oh yes, that first love, heart quickens and a permanent smile...nice write Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/2/2019 6:44:00 PM

Ah, you remember... Hey, even I remember, and nobody's ever accused me of being over-sentimental lately... Thanks, Jeanne. ~ Gershon

Date: 10/2/2019 4:53:00 PM

Gershon this is just precious! Simple yet elegant! You have wowed me again and brought my smile right back!;)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/2/2019 5:07:00 PM

Now we are both smiling, Brenda. Thank you so much for your genuine enthusiasm for this simple write! :) gw

Date: 10/2/2019 3:54:00 PM

Cute my friend. There is nothing better than young love.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/2/2019 4:28:00 PM

You're so right. Young love is so innocent, so pure. The less complicated love is, the better! Thank you so much, Gershon