A Second Helping

sweet coffee, cream and
donuts pervade the sunrise —

         borehole floats in grease

5/30/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 2:09 AM
The punchline was a shocker. But funny; my parents always made homemade donuts and popcorn for supper on Sunday nights. Why I thought of that I have no idea.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 4:04 PM
Love it! The borehole the same as a donut hole ;)
Wolf Avatar
May 31, 2020 at 3:09 PM
That third line there --- I fell for it hook, line, and sinker! :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
May 31, 2020 at 5:16 PM
Yes...clap, clap, clap! You always make my day :)
Michael Avatar
May 31, 2020 at 9:00 AM
You got me licking lips...Nice one
Rodrigues Avatar
May 31, 2020 at 11:48 AM
LOL :)
Proxenos Avatar
May 31, 2020 at 1:02 AM
Hi Kim big coincidence you writ about coffee, and I write about tea - i enjoy both. Hugs, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 31, 2020 at 4:49 AM
I will check it out :)
Mishra Avatar
May 30, 2020 at 6:09 PM
I am on a night duty at the airport sipping my coffee reading your aromatic words. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 31, 2020 at 4:48 AM
:) Thank you, Aditi!
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