A Second Helping

sweet coffee, cream and donuts pervade the sunrise — borehole floats in grease 5/30/2020

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/2/2020 2:09:00 AM

The punchline was a shocker. But funny; my parents always made homemade donuts and popcorn for supper on Sunday nights. Why I thought of that I have no idea.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/2/2020 4:04:00 PM

Love it! The borehole the same as a donut hole ;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/31/2020 3:09:00 PM

That third line there --- I fell for it hook, line, and sinker! :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2020 5:16:00 PM

Yes...clap, clap, clap! You always make my day :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 5/31/2020 9:00:00 AM

You got me licking lips...Nice one

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2020 11:48:00 AM

LOL :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/31/2020 1:02:00 AM

Hi Kim big coincidence you writ about coffee, and I write about tea - i enjoy both. Hugs, Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2020 4:49:00 AM

I will check it out :)

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/30/2020 6:09:00 PM

I am on a night duty at the airport sipping my coffee reading your aromatic words. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2020 4:48:00 AM

:) Thank you, Aditi!