Sidney Hall Mad Poet Poet Rhyme

A Second Chance

I...I'm... frightened, trembling, and sobbing intensely,
It tormented me for years, now... it overshadows me again.
My... weak heartedness and the anxiety it caused,
I am owing, to be made an example, in debt to its pain.

I...I...scarcely survived, its last advance,
However, this time...I have no chance.
My heart is racing, my head spins
I’m helpless and must confess that it wins

I have no way of shielding its onslaught
For it has portrayed itself as a friend, my soul is caught
Alas the only thing left is to give into its will
And let love take its course, let love have its fill.

**Ok I'm Rusty on the love poems I'll stick to me funny ones**

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Elizabeth Wesley November 29, 2011 at 7:23 PM I've read your other love poems Sid and they were too funny. Never read you so serious before. P S Aren't you going to put your picture in?

Doris Culverhouse November 29, 2011 at 1:28 PM Sid., how goes the days?? mine is ok...no blinking lights yet....waiting for my shining knight to scale the roof and bring them out of the attic. hehe....hope he breaks his neck....not!!

Germaine Elliott November 29, 2011 at 7:14 AM Sidney: there are days and times when we may find ourselves caught in a battle of what is true...keep your faith and remember that all feelings are real and never have regrets for them...much love, always.

Sarah Seraphin November 29, 2011 at 12:16 AM * "Hahahaha * What A Suprising Yet Joyful Final * Especially Given That This Is Such A Beautiful Poem * My Dear Precious Sydney * Allow Your Talent May Indeed Have Mastered The Humorous Page In Verse * I Find This Loves Note * Very Beautiful * My Luv & Warmth, Always * Sarah." *