Ilene Bauer Poet Rhyme

A Second Beer

I had a second beer, oh dear,
But now I’ve made it home.
Yet what is very clear, I fear,
Is I can’t write a poem.

My brain is not in gear, so here
Is all that I’ve composed.
Whatever does appear, I fear’s
Ineptitude exposed.

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Robert Johnson July 28, 2015 at 4:46 PM Just go with the flow and soon you'll know. That that's the only way to go. But have a third and you'll probably sound like a loony bird. :) I'm not advocating drinking, I just happen to be on my second beer. :) Have a nice evening ilene. :) Here's to ya. :)

Jan Allison July 22, 2015 at 4:58 AM LOL - I never drink beer only tea - so 2 cups have no affect on my writing ability or inability lol:-) hugs Jan xx