A Scary Relationship

(The voice of a woman, hurt by her own lover.)

He claims to love me
and yet destroys me
my emotions
my soul.

I regret why
I accepted his proposal
I was fooled
fooled by his sweet words.

He is a devouted lair
devouted in lies
and yet, disloyal to love
dishonest.

Now,
I am pierced
torn apart by thorn of love
a sharp spear
that drills my fragile heart.

Pain to depart delays
tears wave my eyes
sadness invade my face
I am hurt, I am bruised.

I am immersed in sorrow
baptised in blood
a ceaseless flood
my heart explodes sorrow.

Is this love ?
that unvails misery
and vails joy ?
I am scared
in a scary relationship.

Drencho POET Loads

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/23/2018 11:59:00 AM
Hi Drencho my fellow South African friend. Your poem is sad but enjoyed it. Please be happy. Jennifer (P)
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Date: 9/24/2018 9:09:00 AM
Hello Jennifer, thank you very much for reading my work. Have a blessed day.
Date: 4/1/2018 12:37:00 PM
Hello Drencho Poet, a good relationship is not suppose to hurt. You must end the scary relationship.You can do better. Havea nice day my friend.
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Date: 4/2/2018 5:24:00 AM
Thank you very much. Have a blessed Easter.
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