A Sapphire Ring

Looking back at the Earth, I can't really describe how beautiful it is from 300 miles up. Looking down, you can tell it's a planet. The sky is black. There's just a thin blue ribbon, what we see as blue sky on Earth. You realize how small it is and how fragile the planet is...............by Astronaut Mike Good: 





                                         a thin blue crescent
                              of earth from the moon looks like
                                         a jewelled head band

                                       crowning a young queen
                                   on a dark night when her love
                                        slides a sapphire hoop

                                          silver stars sparkle 
                                     above this clear azure line 
                                       making love life snug




                                            May 13, 2016
                                      For Rita A. Simmonds
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Simmonds Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 12:20 PM
Dear Balveen: Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Thank you for the reminder! And thank you for participating!
Cheema Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 12:41 PM
That's exceptionally sweet and kind of you, Rita! Thanks for the placement! Love..
Kimathi Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 7:42 AM
Hi Balveen. Congrats for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
Cheema Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 7:56 AM
Thanks Teddy!
Chansarkar Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 10:33 AM
Beautiful words and imagery,thanks Balveen!
Cheema Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 7:56 AM
Thanks Sara!
Haight Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 9:45 PM
Balveen, you have created such lovely Senryus that convey great artistic imagery of our earth as seen from outer space. Congratulations on your nice placement in this Premiere Contest. 7, Hugs, Sandra
Cheema Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 6:26 AM
Delighted with your appreciation, Sandra!
Gazbowski Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 5:16 PM
beautifully crafted Balveen.
Cheema Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 6:26 AM
Thanks Lenny!
Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 8:15 PM
OOPS, sorry, I saw the name Rita right above here, and realized that is the name of the person whose contest you wrote for. Sorry, Balveen.
Cheema Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 5:52 AM
No apologies only smiles, Andrea!
Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 8:14 PM
this is a very creative response to the challenge of the ribbon of blue, Rita. I like it very much.
Cheema Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 8:40 PM
What's in a name?! You've found my work creative, so that is it! Thanks Andrea!
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