-A Saigon Story

We lived in Saigon many, many moons ago
Of which I have a tale to share
About a pair of my husband boots 
His favourites…. the ones he loved to wear

A shoe shiner came to the work office
A teenage boy who looked very poor
Walked into the office quickly
And stole shoes from at the door

He ran with several pairs in hand 
While being pursued he dropped a few
But alas my husbands boots
Had vanished without a clue

I  had this  overwhelming gut feeling
That I would find this treasured pair
Though extremely unlikely and unrealistic 
Due to abundant shoes stalls in Saigon “everywhere”!

This feeling never wavered 
So each day on the school run while in the taxi
I intently scoured every shoe stall 
As far as my eye could see

Months later coming back from school
I thought I spotted them in a stall
Unsure but excited
I gave my extremely sceptical husband a call

My husband and his Vietnamese friend
Drove passed the stall on his motor bike
To first see if it was the said boots
And YES…..I was right!

My husband stayed out of sight
While his friend went to the stall
He bought back the boots at the Vietnamese price
As the foreigner price would have been triple or more!!

So,due to an overwhelming gut feeling
His beloved boots were home
Bought twice by the same man
Decades of moons later…. said boots he still does own!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rodrigues Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 7:34 AM
Great story, Deb!
M  Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 4:22 PM
Thanks Kim….appreciate your comment! Debx
Empress Avatar
June 17, 2024 at 4:09 PM
Dear debx your story is so poetically told and flows seamlessly. This reminds me of something that I recently went through. Someone that works for me in my house stole something that was close to my heart, a present from my late uncle and lied too saying she got it from another shop, but it was speciallh designed in specific way for me so i figured its a lie etc so i made a deal, told her i love what she has and reminds me of someone so sell it to me. Haha and bought it back. Insane. Smh. You always write about things that are relatable. Pleasure reading your work
Empress Avatar
June 19, 2024 at 1:38 PM
Yes unfortunately haha gosh
M  Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 4:23 PM
Thanks Ink….does she still work for you?? Ha….Debx
Crandall Avatar
June 17, 2024 at 1:03 PM
Great story Deb, not only gut feeling, but constant looking. Sounds like a true story?
M  Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 4:22 PM
Hey David….Yes a true story! Thanks…Debx
Goldsmith Avatar
June 17, 2024 at 12:10 PM
What a wonderful write/story. Glad you got the boots back. It is hard to give up something one really loves... Have a blessed day writing away......................
M  Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 4:27 PM
Thanks sweet paula! Debx
Narain Avatar
June 17, 2024 at 11:24 AM
Nice story. Favorite things are hard to give up. This foreigner"s triple price uis everywhere, even in my expat country.
M  Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 4:26 PM
Spot on comment Jay….when we lived in Saigon many years ago they had a local price then a foreigner price And it was much more expensive ha! Where is your expat country Jay? Thanks…Debx
Greenhough Avatar
June 17, 2024 at 8:09 AM
A great story and poem. I didn't know about the common stealing there. I hope the thief's life has improved so he can live a good life. Thanks for this insight.
M  Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 4:30 PM
It was a poor country Hilda! So pleased you liked my poem…Debx
May Avatar
June 17, 2024 at 6:28 AM
Your gut feeling paid off, Very nicely told Deb
M  Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 4:29 PM
Thanks Joe….nice to see you! Debx
Willason Avatar
June 17, 2024 at 3:50 AM
A fascinating and just a delightful story...cleverly put together and reads so well. Gifted my dear Deb....love it. Take care
M  Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 4:26 PM
Thankyou my lovely kind friend! Debx
Wolf Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 7:20 PM
What an amazing story, Deb. Nothing like a women's intuition, it seems! Bravo, gw
M  Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 4:28 PM
Aww thanks BB! Yes l felt so strongly l would find them even though it seemed impossible! Debx
Bauer Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 1:09 PM
what a great story, deb! you've told it very well, too. so glad it had a happy ending!
M  Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 4:33 PM
Thanks Ilene….got a few stories to tell of our time in Saigon….very interesting place and the Vietnamese people were so lovely! Debx
Cunningham Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 1:03 PM
Lol, an enjoyable read Deb, what were the chance of that happening, you should have bought a lottery ticket. Tom
M  Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 4:32 PM
No lottery tickets in Saigon or Ho Chi Minh City l should say back in those days Tom!! Ha….thanks my friend….Debx
Edmonds  Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 12:18 PM
What a thing that was Deb, for your husband’s boots to be stolen, then finding them for sale on a stall and buying them back. The little devil … Beryl
M  Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 4:31 PM
Hehe….yes quite the story….treasured boots still! Thanks….Debx
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