A Sad Scenery

Yellow leaf slowly
floating to mourn with others
as tall maples shed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Andresen Avatar
September 25, 2013 at 6:10 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Andrew. - well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Mehta Avatar
September 25, 2013 at 5:05 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Andrew
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 11:57 PM
Yours is a bit like mine, Andrew. So good to see you. Long time no see!!! Congrats for this one.
A  Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 5:57 PM
well done. Congratulations:) ~~love SKAT
Brown Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 3:57 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrew in Rick Parise's contest "A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn)". Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 4:40 PM
lovely haiku, congrats on your HM
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 11:15 AM
Nicely done, Andrew . Congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 10:19 PM
A really wonderful haiku Andrew. Congratulations on your HM.
Scripca Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 7:12 PM
Beautiful image you create, dear Andrew. Congratulations on your win. Love, iolanda
Mehta Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 7:03 PM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest, Andrew
Sweetheart Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 5:12 PM
Congrats Andrew on your HM in Rick's contest ... a lovely write and win for u to enjoy tonight my friend..with luv...
Devonshire Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 10:54 AM
Excellent use of personifaction, giving human emotions to the yellow leaf, Andrew. If this is for the contest, I wish you success. Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 9:23 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry Andrew. Poets here offer such diverse writings and to me it is a pleasure to read each and everyone. I will not be here at the Soup to read from Friday through Monday. I hope you will find mountains of inspiration during that time. I look forward to reading when I return. Have a great weekend. Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 9:49 PM
nice one
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