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A Sad Scenery

Yellow leaf slowly floating to mourn with others as tall maples shed

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/25/2013 6:10:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Andrew. - well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/25/2013 5:05:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest, Andrew

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2013 11:57:00 PM

Yours is a bit like mine, Andrew. So good to see you. Long time no see!!! Congrats for this one.

Skat A

Date: 9/24/2013 5:57:00 PM

well done. Congratulations:) ~~love SKAT

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/7/2010 3:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Andrew in Rick Parise's contest "A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn)". Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/6/2010 4:40:00 PM

lovely haiku, congrats on your HM

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2010 11:15:00 AM

Nicely done, Andrew . Congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/5/2010 10:19:00 PM

A really wonderful haiku Andrew. Congratulations on your HM.

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 9/5/2010 7:12:00 PM

Beautiful image you create, dear Andrew. Congratulations on your win. Love, iolanda

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/5/2010 7:03:00 PM

Congratulations on the HM win in the contest, Andrew

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/5/2010 5:12:00 PM

Congrats Andrew on your HM in Rick's contest ... a lovely write and win for u to enjoy tonight my friend..with luv...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/1/2010 10:54:00 AM

Excellent use of personifaction, giving human emotions to the yellow leaf, Andrew. If this is for the contest, I wish you success. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/1/2010 9:23:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry Andrew. Poets here offer such diverse writings and to me it is a pleasure to read each and everyone. I will not be here at the Soup to read from Friday through Monday. I hope you will find mountains of inspiration during that time. I look forward to reading when I return. Have a great weekend. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/31/2010 9:49:00 PM

nice one