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A SAD SCENERY

Yellow leaf slowly floating to mourn with others as tall maples shed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/25/2013 6:10:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Andrew. - well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/25/2013 5:05:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Andrew
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Date: 9/24/2013 11:57:00 PM
Yours is a bit like mine, Andrew. So good to see you. Long time no see!!! Congrats for this one.
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Date: 9/24/2013 5:57:00 PM
well done. Congratulations:) ~~love SKAT
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Date: 9/7/2010 3:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrew in Rick Parise's contest "A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn)". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/6/2010 4:40:00 PM
lovely haiku, congrats on your HM
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Date: 9/6/2010 11:15:00 AM
Nicely done, Andrew . Congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/5/2010 10:19:00 PM
A really wonderful haiku Andrew. Congratulations on your HM.
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Date: 9/5/2010 7:12:00 PM
Beautiful image you create, dear Andrew. Congratulations on your win. Love, iolanda
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Date: 9/5/2010 7:03:00 PM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest, Andrew
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Date: 9/5/2010 5:12:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your HM in Rick's contest ... a lovely write and win for u to enjoy tonight my friend..with luv...
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Date: 9/1/2010 10:54:00 AM
Excellent use of personifaction, giving human emotions to the yellow leaf, Andrew. If this is for the contest, I wish you success. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/1/2010 9:23:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry Andrew. Poets here offer such diverse writings and to me it is a pleasure to read each and everyone. I will not be here at the Soup to read from Friday through Monday. I hope you will find mountains of inspiration during that time. I look forward to reading when I return. Have a great weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/31/2010 9:49:00 PM
nice one
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