Cynthia Alvez Poet Verse

A Sad Good-Bye

You turned and walked away
shoulders slumped, eyes downcast,
the morning air was still;
bright sun crept through the slats
of window's crooked shades
like the eye lids of dawn.

Like the eye lids of dawn
I saw your tears falling,
wanting to touch your face
it was too late you had
closed the door on our love.

12:11 a.m.
Feb. 19, 2011

C. Alvez

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Terry Cunningham August 22, 2012 at 5:00 PM My Interpertation, I'm sure is different.. Right On!! It's obvious why you're my only fave so far.. No disrespect to any others.. Pen on.. TC: Thats funny, the validate letters are TERR, maybe ive drank too much... LOL My name is terry.. HA!!!

Skyler Dawn August 8, 2012 at 9:51 PM thats so sad... and beautiful. Cynthia Alvez August 9, 2012 at 6:16 AM Skyler, Thank you so much for your commet! C. Alvez