A Rugged Incident

It was calm Sunday morning
everybody lay snoring 
in the midst of park 
eyes gave a spark 
heart started flowing 
mind started glowing 
started walking fast 
forgetting my past
first time our eyes met
and time for the meeting set
the story was going fine
we both , enjoying the wine
good times lasts so short
she gave a thought
to meet her friend
i agreed  so that she doesn't offend
again the same place
but the time played an ace
i saw my past
walking so fast
towards my table
started towards my gable
from the other edge
came the sledge
girlfriend said she's here
aghast i said where
she turned back
i turned back
life playing fun
everything round like bun
my past in front
and present behind to confront
she said "you?"
my girlfriend said "he's my new"
laughing out loud
gathering the crowd
 she said "he's my past "
i said "am not going to last"
my girlfriend turning hot
waiter arriving with biryani pot
my past  already out
walking slowly listening her shout 
my past went, present gone
standing with future alone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/17/2015 12:09:00 PM
- Congratulations on your first poems here at P-Soup - A pleasure to welcome you, Abhishek :) - Hope you will find this page interesting and post many more thoughts and words in the future - Good luck :) - // Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/16/2015 2:40:00 PM
Hi Abhishek, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Abhishek Raghav
Date: 5/17/2015 12:47:00 AM
thanks a lot for this warm welcome :) :) i appreciate it and i wuld love to recieve help frm this community thanks again
Date: 5/16/2015 8:16:00 AM
Abhishek, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Abhishek Raghav
Date: 4/23/2016 1:03:00 PM
hey SKAT A i am back with one of my poems plz do read them and give your comments thank you also for more of my poems visit raghavpoem.blogspot.in
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Abhishek Raghav
Date: 5/17/2015 12:48:00 AM
hello skat thanks for the warm welcome and thank you for the comment i will look forward for more of it :) thnaks again
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