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A Royal Family of Waterfalls

Waterfalls They glide down and past, grand Just like Queens, in long flowing silk robes... What a sight! They bear majesty too Just like Kings, seated rightly on thrones. Fall Segments - They wait to take their place, Not unlike princes, set to take charge Waterfalls They still are their own selves - And live to calm minds of Earth’s beings… *Fall segments are tiny tributaries of Waterfalls. Form - Crystalline - 3/6/9

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Skat A

Date: 8/10/2015 6:26:00 PM

SNEHA, :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win! *SKAT*

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/10/2015 3:19:00 PM

Awesome use of metaphors !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/10/2015 1:32:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Sneha! Great work!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/9/2015 5:21:00 PM

oh I think this is my first time to see this one. Why, it is just wonderful!! Congrats for your win.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/8/2014 7:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your great win Sneha with this beautiful poem.

Sneha Rv
Date: 11/8/2014 9:05:00 AM

Thanks a lot!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/8/2014 4:11:00 AM

Excellent and brilliant verse, congrats on the win, Sneha

Sneha Rv
Date: 11/8/2014 4:44:00 AM

Thank you so much, Dr.Ram!

Paul Callus

Date: 11/7/2014 9:16:00 AM

Hi Sneha! This is excellent! The 3rd stanza, dealing with fall segments, is very clever. Congratulations...finishing 1st in Nette's contest is a feather in your cap!! Maybe one day I will emulate you!:) Keep that pen flowing. // paul

Sneha Rv
Date: 11/8/2014 9:12:00 AM

Thank you so much! This compliment is as valuable as the 1st place I got! Sneha

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/7/2014 1:38:00 AM

my, what a unique treatment of the theme, sneha.. a royal win for you...thanks for being part of my contest and huge congrats!"

Sneha Rv
Date: 11/7/2014 7:55:00 AM

Thank you so much, Dear Nette! I am soooo happy you liked it!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/6/2014 10:48:00 PM

Waterfalls do seem regal Sneha. A wonderful win with this unique and lovely entry. Big congratulations!

Sneha Rv
Date: 11/7/2014 10:59:00 AM

Thanks a lot, dear Connie!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2014 9:46:00 PM

hey, that is neat how you worked in fall segments. I had not heard that term before. Also, great personification. A very creative work. BIG congrats.

Sneha Rv
Date: 11/7/2014 11:00:00 AM

Thank you so much, Andrea! Congratulations on your wonderful win too!

Debra Squyres

Date: 11/6/2014 8:56:00 PM

How lovely !!! Love how you personified the waterfalls and congratulations on your big win !!! Honored to share it with your wonderful poem !!!

Sneha Rv
Date: 11/8/2014 4:43:00 AM

Thank you so much, Debra - I am honoured too! Congrats!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/6/2014 6:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your huge win with this unique take on waterfalls.

Sneha Rv
Date: 11/7/2014 11:04:00 AM

Thanks a lot! c:

Jan Allison

Date: 11/6/2014 3:11:00 PM

many congrats on your win:-) was great to read this again:-) hugs jan xx

Sneha Rv
Date: 11/7/2014 11:01:00 AM

c: Of Course! c:

Jan Allison
Date: 11/7/2014 7:56:00 AM

Thank you so much - the most important thing is it has been read and that is all I am concerned about - it is a winner in my eyes:-) hugs Jan xx

Sneha Rv
Date: 11/7/2014 7:54:00 AM

Aww! That's ok - But I just loved it!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/7/2014 7:46:00 AM

Nette said the syllable count was off - but i used her syllable checker - I always do - hey ho never mind as long as people read it that's the main thing.

Sneha Rv
Date: 11/7/2014 6:35:00 AM

Thanks a lot, Dear Jan! I loved yours too - One of my favorites!