Sneha Rv Poet Verse

A Royal Family of Waterfalls

Waterfalls
        They glide down and past, grand
  Just like Queens, in long flowing silk robes...

                      What a sight! 
               They bear majesty too
  Just like Kings, seated rightly on thrones.

                         Fall Segments -
             They wait to take their place,
       Not unlike princes, set to take charge
                          

                            Waterfalls
             They still are their own selves - 
    And live to calm minds of Earth’s beings…



*Fall segments are tiny tributaries of Waterfalls.
Form - Crystalline - 3/6/9

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Skat A August 10, 2015 at 6:26 PM SNEHA, :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win! *SKAT*

Sara Kendrick August 10, 2015 at 3:19 PM Awesome use of metaphors !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 10, 2015 at 1:32 AM Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Sneha! Great work!

Andrea Dietrich August 9, 2015 at 5:21 PM oh I think this is my first time to see this one. Why, it is just wonderful!! Congrats for your win.

Brenda Meier-Hans November 8, 2014 at 7:55 AM Congratulations on your great win Sneha with this beautiful poem. Sneha Rv November 8, 2014 at 9:05 AM Thanks a lot!

Dr.Ram Mehta November 8, 2014 at 4:11 AM Excellent and brilliant verse, congrats on the win, Sneha Sneha Rv November 8, 2014 at 4:44 AM Thank you so much, Dr.Ram!

Paul Callus November 7, 2014 at 9:16 AM Hi Sneha! This is excellent! The 3rd stanza, dealing with fall segments, is very clever. Congratulations...finishing 1st in Nette's contest is a feather in your cap!! Maybe one day I will emulate you!:) Keep that pen flowing. // paul Sneha Rv November 8, 2014 at 9:12 AM Thank you so much! This compliment is as valuable as the 1st place I got! Sneha

Nette Onclaud November 7, 2014 at 1:38 AM my, what a unique treatment of the theme, sneha.. a royal win for you...thanks for being part of my contest and huge congrats!" Sneha Rv November 7, 2014 at 7:55 AM Thank you so much, Dear Nette! I am soooo happy you liked it!

Connie Marcum Wong November 6, 2014 at 10:48 PM Waterfalls do seem regal Sneha. A wonderful win with this unique and lovely entry. Big congratulations! Sneha Rv November 7, 2014 at 10:59 AM Thanks a lot, dear Connie!

Andrea Dietrich November 6, 2014 at 9:46 PM hey, that is neat how you worked in fall segments. I had not heard that term before. Also, great personification. A very creative work. BIG congrats. Sneha Rv November 7, 2014 at 11:00 AM Thank you so much, Andrea! Congratulations on your wonderful win too!

Debra Squyres November 6, 2014 at 8:56 PM How lovely !!! Love how you personified the waterfalls and congratulations on your big win !!! Honored to share it with your wonderful poem !!! Sneha Rv November 8, 2014 at 4:43 AM Thank you so much, Debra - I am honoured too! Congrats!

Maurice Yvonne November 6, 2014 at 6:26 PM Congratulations on your huge win with this unique take on waterfalls. Sneha Rv November 7, 2014 at 11:04 AM Thanks a lot! c:

Jan Allison November 6, 2014 at 3:11 PM many congrats on your win:-) was great to read this again:-) hugs jan xx Sneha Rv November 7, 2014 at 11:01 AM c: Of Course! c: Jan Allison November 7, 2014 at 7:56 AM Thank you so much - the most important thing is it has been read and that is all I am concerned about - it is a winner in my eyes:-) hugs Jan xx Sneha Rv November 7, 2014 at 7:54 AM Aww! That's ok - But I just loved it! Jan Allison November 7, 2014 at 7:46 AM Nette said the syllable count was off - but i used her syllable checker - I always do - hey ho never mind as long as people read it that's the main thing. Sneha Rv November 7, 2014 at 6:35 AM Thanks a lot, Dear Jan! I loved yours too - One of my favorites!

Len Gasun November 5, 2014 at 7:08 AM This is magnificent poem and image my dear friend Sneha! Great job on this! Good luck in the contest! love lots and big hugs, Leonora Sneha Rv November 5, 2014 at 8:10 AM Thanks a lot, Dear Leonora! Will you enter too?

Jan Allison October 27, 2014 at 8:00 PM Wonderful imagery I think this will do well for you in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx Jan Allison October 30, 2014 at 8:20 AM I've started one but its not inspiring at the moment lol hugs jan xx Sneha Rv October 29, 2014 at 7:59 PM Thanks a lot! Are you entering?