A Round and a Round

Your beauty like pure white snow
Like the seas waves back and forth we go
Like the trees leaves turning brown until eventually twisting and turning around and around
until they hit the ground
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Agustin Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 11:46 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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January 26, 2016 at 11:10 PM
DAREL, A great pleasure to find and read the inspiration poured from your pen today. Love ** SKAT **
Mehta Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 8:16 AM
A very nice romantic feelings you have expressed here.darel
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