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A Rose From Heaven's Garden

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A rose just picked from heaven's garden; a gift that keeps on giving, that's you. Passions that you invoke within me, ardent. This i know deep in my heart to be true... you shall remain my lovely, celestial flower; thriving on my dear, far longer than spring. You reduce me to rubble with your power; your seductiveness, quite a wondrous thing! O, crimson rose, how colorfully you bloom! Beauty personified; a sight for my sore eyes. Glorious! You illuminate faces full of gloom; swaying to and fro as a gentle zephyr sighs Smelling so fresh, your sweet fragrance. As I breathe you in with joy and gladness, my dancing heart glows with such radiance Bloom on, bloom forever with your cheerfulness Submitted for... 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 8 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mark Toney Date written: 01/22/2021 Date submitted: 07/18/2022

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Date: 2/19/2021 2:51:00 AM
I love flowers and this is splendid composition. Adding to my favourite.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/19/2021 3:18:00 AM
Thank you so much for the wonderful visit and FAV, Rama:-) Most obliged.
Date: 1/23/2021 6:07:00 AM
So delightful, colorful and fragrant--an awesome ode --as beautiful as the red rose! Into my FAVES.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/23/2021 7:31:00 AM
I greatly appreciate the wonderful feedback and FAV, Vijay:-) Blessings, my friend!
Date: 1/23/2021 4:02:00 AM
Your lines are filled with romantic phrases, and each one as beautiful as the picture you've chosen to accompany your poetic work. Well done, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/23/2021 5:26:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jenna:-) Coming from such a superb poetess, it means a great deal!
Date: 1/23/2021 2:09:00 AM
Lovely. I enjoyed. God bless you with a win and loving prayers for you
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/23/2021 3:06:00 AM
Thank you very much, Regina:-)