Edward Ibeh Poet Rhyme

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A Rose From Heaven's Garden

A rose just picked from heaven's garden;
     a gift that keeps on giving, that's you.
 Passions that you invoke within me, ardent.
   This i know deep in my heart to be true...

  you shall remain my lovely, celestial flower;
  thriving on my dear, far longer than spring.
   You reduce me to rubble with your power;
  your seductiveness, quite a wondrous thing!

   O, crimson rose, how colorfully you bloom!
  Beauty personified; a sight for my sore eyes.
   Glorious! You illuminate faces full of gloom;
   swaying to and fro as a gentle zephyr sighs

      Smelling so fresh, your sweet fragrance.
     As I breathe you in with joy and gladness,
    my dancing heart glows with such radiance
 Bloom on, bloom forever with your cheerfulness



Submitted for...
 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 8 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Mark Toney
Date written: 01/22/2021
Date submitted: 07/18/2022

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Rama Balasubramanian February 19, 2021 at 2:51 AM I love flowers and this is splendid composition. Adding to my favourite. Edward Ibeh February 19, 2021 at 3:18 AM Thank you so much for the wonderful visit and FAV, Rama:-) Most obliged.

Vijay Pandit January 23, 2021 at 6:07 AM So delightful, colorful and fragrant--an awesome ode --as beautiful as the red rose! Into my FAVES. Edward Ibeh January 23, 2021 at 7:31 AM I greatly appreciate the wonderful feedback and FAV, Vijay:-) Blessings, my friend!

Jenna Logan January 23, 2021 at 4:02 AM Your lines are filled with romantic phrases, and each one as beautiful as the picture you've chosen to accompany your poetic work. Well done, Edward. Edward Ibeh January 23, 2021 at 5:26 AM Thanks so much, Jenna:-) Coming from such a superb poetess, it means a great deal!

Regina Mcintosh January 23, 2021 at 2:09 AM Lovely. I enjoyed. God bless you with a win and loving prayers for you Edward Ibeh January 23, 2021 at 3:06 AM Thank you very much, Regina:-)