A Rose For the Desert

I stand in the midst of swirling sand
of this arid and sun-ravaged land,
I hold in my hand a vibrant rose
From this harsh sun I shielded it close.
A solitary rose; yet how did it wilt
right in my hand that I feel guilt--
Oh God, did I embrace it too close?
Why was I not able to save my red rose,
Petal by petal it fell apart on the ground
breaking my heart asunder but nary a sound;
A measly flower-- is that all you see?
A whimsical notion, a foolhardy task of me!

I kissed this denuded stem with my undying love,
Damnation has befallen like a lightning from above
And the heavens stood by as my love lay dying
while I was weeping, while I was crying.
Thus let me this much to you all assure--
Never will I lay my hand on a thing so pure;
Yet, if all my lofty hopes dissipate erelong
I stand guilty I confess, I did do wrong.
I was a fool; it was but a frivolous scheme
A rose to bloom in wilderness was my dream!


 
(Inspired by “A Dream within a Dream” by Edgar Allan Poe)
Put Your Best Poe forward contest by Tommy Boy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ashley Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 5:47 PM
An awesome write Abdul. Congratulations on your win!
Negron Flores Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 6:52 AM
Congratulations Abdul.
A. Sharma Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 4:16 AM
Brilliant write abdul.. congrats on fine win!
A  Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 11:42 PM
Abdul, Congratulations on your Poe, Poe WIN! SKAT :)
A. Sharma Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 1:29 AM
Very expressive poem abdul! Congrats on big win!
A  Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 8:08 PM
Abdul. Congratulations on your HM -xox-SKAT
Allison Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 10:47 AM
beautifully penned Abdul good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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