Michael J. Falotico Poet Couplet

A Room With No Doors

There is a place that I can hide in...
Its a world that holds past sins...

With walls that let me scream...
With no doors that close on dreams...

Where judgement comes from the heart...
With no blinders to slow my start...

A safe place I can step in and out of...
Where mistakes die, and there's only love...

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Kelli Egloff-Metzgar November 20, 2011 at 11:37 AM I have a place such as this Beautifully written...Kelli

Dinda Minardi November 11, 2011 at 6:53 AM I need that kind of place too, Michael. But somehow, society won't let us do that... Love this as always darlingg :) God! I miss your steamy poems, Michael. hahaha

M.I.A . November 8, 2011 at 8:19 PM awww, this is very... peaceful. every words complete one of the other that makes this piece simply... amazing!

Bl Devnath November 6, 2011 at 8:38 AM Nicely written my friend. Really I am missing this wonderful world where my real friends are living. Sorry to myself as "am' late to read your nice writings. Thanks for your comment on my poem. bl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 6, 2011 at 5:16 AM we all need a place to vent Michael luv.. a perfect choice with words that touch the heart and soul .. dealing with the past is difficult but we move past it all to a bright future .. excellent thoughts luv.. your J.G. adores her W.K.. xoxo.. thankxx for my first place for "Peachy Posh".. can u guess who my muse was for the words??

Gwendolen Song November 4, 2011 at 3:04 PM What's your adddress, Michael? This room is awesome....is it for rent? I might like to stay there for some meditation. Wonderful concept..the only part I would take out of this room is its ability to hold my past sins...it better have a SUPER LARGE WALK IN CLOSET! All the best to you, M. Gwendolen

Shannon Deane November 3, 2011 at 7:02 AM Beautifully written Michael...good to see you back on the soup...here's to hoping all is well...luv shannon

Sarah Seraphin November 2, 2011 at 5:55 PM * “`Where Judgment Comes From The Heart * Where There's Only Love` * Every Line Is Stirring Unto Beautiful * My Dear Sweet Precious Michael * I Have Viewed Your Lovely Verse Afore * Tis As Beautiful As This Perfect Jewel * Makes My Heart Smile * Always * Sarah.” *

Cory Long November 2, 2011 at 5:46 PM this was great!! love where you took it cory