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notes from my TPRQ poem. 

A Romantic Charm

The crown color nebulas are encircled with Eden’s glory
Creations of my paradisaical found, the blossoming trees         
Thee ever enduring golden emblems of authority and might     
Nonetheless, thy innocent essences are as soft as the moonlight




February 3, 2018  - Updated 5/14/2019
Contest: Romantic charm in 4 lines
Sponsored by: Silent One

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Line Gauthier February 18, 2018 at 2:51 PM A lovely four-liner. Congrats on your win, G. G. Jay February 19, 2018 at 2:10 AM Thanks for commenting. I appreciate it.

Andrea Dietrich February 15, 2018 at 6:17 PM I love the contrast of might and softness at the end! Congrats on a great win. G. Jay February 17, 2018 at 7:30 PM Thank you for your comment. Glad you enjoyed.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 14, 2018 at 11:53 AM - Congratulations, G. - // Anne-Lise :) G. Jay February 17, 2018 at 7:28 PM Thank you Sunshine-Anne.

Vijay Pandit February 14, 2018 at 9:34 AM Congrats on your awesome win..highly romantic depiction. G. Jay February 17, 2018 at 7:29 PM Glad you like it.

Alexis Y. February 14, 2018 at 9:11 AM Hi G, Congratulations on your winning write. PS, Happy Valentine's Day:-) Alexis G. Jay February 14, 2018 at 9:20 AM thank you.

Silent One February 14, 2018 at 8:39 AM What an awesome first line G, a romantic entry for the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. G. Jay February 14, 2018 at 9:20 AM glad you like. thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 14, 2018 at 3:38 AM - Lovely 4 lines, G. :) - Best wishes in the contest - // Anne-Lise :) G. Jay February 14, 2018 at 9:21 AM :)