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The crown color nebulas are encircled with Eden’s glory Creations of my paradisaical found, the blossoming trees Thee ever enduring golden emblems of authority and might Nonetheless, thy innocent essences are as soft as the moonlight February 3, 2018 - Updated 5/14/2019 Contest: Romantic charm in 4 lines Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 2/18/2018 2:51:00 PM
A lovely four-liner. Congrats on your win, G.
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G. Jay
Date: 2/19/2018 2:10:00 AM
Thanks for commenting. I appreciate it.
Date: 2/15/2018 6:17:00 PM
I love the contrast of might and softness at the end! Congrats on a great win.
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G. Jay
Date: 2/17/2018 7:30:00 PM
Thank you for your comment. Glad you enjoyed.
Date: 2/14/2018 11:53:00 AM
- Congratulations, G. - // Anne-Lise :)
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G. Jay
Date: 2/17/2018 7:28:00 PM
Thank you Sunshine-Anne.
Date: 2/14/2018 9:34:00 AM
Congrats on your awesome win..highly romantic depiction.
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G. Jay
Date: 2/17/2018 7:29:00 PM
Glad you like it.
Date: 2/14/2018 9:11:00 AM
Hi G, Congratulations on your winning write. PS, Happy Valentine's Day:-) Alexis
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G. Jay
Date: 2/14/2018 9:20:00 AM
thank you.
Date: 2/14/2018 8:39:00 AM
What an awesome first line G, a romantic entry for the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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G. Jay
Date: 2/14/2018 9:20:00 AM
glad you like. thank you.
Date: 2/14/2018 3:38:00 AM
- Lovely 4 lines, G. :) - Best wishes in the contest - // Anne-Lise :)
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G. Jay
Date: 2/14/2018 9:21:00 AM
:)

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