A Rock Concert

Marshals oh so loud
And massive in their stacking
Make the Rock Stars proud.

deborah burch©2011



Form: senryu

Posted:3/14/2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Merryman Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 4:05 PM
Congrats on your win, Deborah! Love, Kim
Brown Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 6:20 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku" contest Deborah. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2012 at 5:21 PM
Way to go in the contest, Deborah. Congratulations
Burch Avatar
March 18, 2012 at 5:55 PM
Thank you Andrea!! You as well hun!! :) You are creating wonderful works....Big HUG~Deb~
Sweetheart Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 9:22 PM
congrats Deborah on an awesome win for these sdplendide words of grand imagery Haiku luv..
Burch Avatar
March 18, 2012 at 5:56 PM
Thank You Linda!!! :) Big Hug!!!~Deb~
Taylor Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 8:35 AM
Congrats, Deb. Excellent. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
Burch Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 9:39 AM
Thank you Ralph!!! :) Hugggss~Deb~
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March 15, 2012 at 10:57 PM
DEBORAH, ~.Congratulations in my haiku contest ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
Burch Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 1:59 AM
OMG!!! ;) Thank you *PD ...this was quite unexpected...but has put such a bright star into my dark night ;) Thank you ...BIG Hugggss~Deb~
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