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a robin hops

a robin hops after the gardener - - eats a worm * I live in England

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Date: 11/30/2011 7:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Animal Haiku" contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/30/2011 3:15:00 AM
I can see it Jack.Very nice.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/30/2011 2:06:00 AM
Jack congrats on your win ..David
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Date: 11/29/2011 10:48:00 PM
JACK;-) ,.. Congratulations on your wonderful HAIKU..FOR DEBBIE~ Take care, and have yourself a great night,. ;-) ~p.d.
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Date: 11/29/2011 9:54:00 PM
This sure has a lightness to this (I think it's the image of the robin hopping) ---yup, yummy worm for that robin :) Super congrats on your win, Jack :D
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Date: 11/29/2011 9:44:00 PM
Jack, I love this. But who ate the worm? the robin or the gardener? heehee
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Date: 11/17/2011 6:32:00 PM
another delight Jack.. poetry in motion luv.. good luck in the contest too..
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Date: 11/16/2011 2:45:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..That is an interesting meal..A raw worm...Sara
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Date: 11/16/2011 2:16:00 PM
So you see the robins year-round too, Jack! I bet in the northern counties of England, other critters emerge in winter. I love the image of the robin following the gardener and finding his treat -- the worm. Best wishes in Deb's contest with this great write. I hope she realizes that you are on the Southwest coast of England. Excellent haiku! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/16/2011 1:41:00 PM
Very clever write Jack! The robin gets the worm, yay(we have tons of robins here all summer long)! Isn't it funny how they hop? You have written an outstanding work!! Awesome going!!
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