A River Made In Two Years

it starts off as a trickle slowly flowing
like a tear down the cheek and the pain is slowly growing

the trickle soon grows but not yet a stream
as the pain grows and the love was just a dream

a stream slowly forms and travels down the path
a path traveled by the heartbroken whose love is in the past

the stream slowly builds into a river finally flowing free
jus like the flowing river the heart is free to breath
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 7/12/2010 1:44:00 PM
Enjoyed this write today. Please check out my latest criminals part 3 when you have time.. ofcourse the story isn't true. Have a great day.
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Date: 4/17/2010 2:11:00 AM
I can see this one...Very expressive and descriptive...I wonder if the river that flows from the throne of God is his tears because man won't come to him....Great work...If I have not done so, welcome to soup...I hope that your stay is production with many writes and I hope that you enjoy reading the many poems that are posted..Sara
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Date: 3/30/2010 10:27:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today George. I wish you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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