Brian Strand Poet Verse

A River Line Poem

Whither O willow weeping so free, do whisper to me
the comings and goings of this flowing river we see;
Hither O willow weeping so free,  do whisper to me
of hidden eddys and pools where freshwater life runs free,
speak of your memories ,o beautiful and bless-ed tree.

For Rick P's River line form contest  (5 lines of 14 syllables)

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Kai Michael Neumann November 28, 2016 at 1:11 AM Congratulations Brian. 'Whisper to me' your poem does. Nice, Kai Brian Strand November 28, 2016 at 3:08 AM Thanks for your kind words Kai

Kim Rodrigues November 27, 2016 at 7:06 PM The weeping willow is a witness :) Congrats, Brian! Brian Strand November 28, 2016 at 12:01 AM Thank you Kim

Sandra Haight November 27, 2016 at 6:39 PM Lovely imagery in your Monorhyme, Brian. Congratulations on your fine placement. Sandra Brian Strand November 28, 2016 at 12:02 AM Thank you Sandra

Tamal Kundu November 26, 2016 at 6:25 AM Absolutely beautiful, Brian! Good luck in the contest. :) Brian Strand November 26, 2016 at 7:45 AM Thanks Tamal for your kind comment

Balveen Cheema November 25, 2016 at 4:28 AM A 7 Brian! Found it so beautiful! Brian Strand November 25, 2016 at 5:53 AM Thank you Balveen for your very kind and encouraging words

Joanna Daniel November 15, 2016 at 6:47 AM This is beautiful, Brian:) a 7:) Brian Strand November 15, 2016 at 8:13 AM Thank you Jo for your always much valued comments.