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A Rival

We had the best time I told you about my life why you turn my foe
Written: December 29, 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 1/2/2022 3:11:00 AM
Three lines of pain, break-ups are always sad...Delice
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Date: 12/30/2021 1:47:00 AM
That's life unfortunately. We take offence for a small reason. Great write.
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Date: 12/29/2021 2:18:00 PM
A story of unrequited love can be unpleasant. Well said, Lasaad.
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Date: 12/29/2021 2:07:00 PM
When the trust is gone so is your vault of secrets. Tom
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Date: 12/29/2021 1:52:00 PM
Some things are best kept to ourselves Lasaad, especially our demons, except in a poem perhaps, evocative as always, cheers David
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Date: 12/29/2021 12:56:00 PM
- 5-7-5- haiku is haiku for me ... great written, Las :) - Happy New Year - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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