A Rival

We had the best time I told you about my life why you turn my foe
Written: December 29, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Skelly Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 3:11 AM
Three lines of pain, break-ups are always sad...Delice
Buhagiar Avatar
December 30, 2021 at 1:47 AM
That's life unfortunately. We take offence for a small reason. Great write.
Pandit Avatar
December 29, 2021 at 2:18 PM
A story of unrequited love can be unpleasant. Well said, Lasaad.
Cunningham Avatar
December 29, 2021 at 2:07 PM
When the trust is gone so is your vault of secrets. Tom
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December 29, 2021 at 1:52 PM
Some things are best kept to ourselves Lasaad, especially our demons, except in a poem perhaps, evocative as always, cheers David
Andresen Avatar
December 29, 2021 at 12:56 PM
- 5-7-5- haiku is haiku for me ... great written, Las :) - Happy New Year - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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