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A Ripple To Me

go beyond high tide become overwhelmed in lows ~ all ripples plateau A Ripple To Me 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: JCB Brul Howmanysyllables 17 02/19/23

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Date: 10/31/2023 12:33:00 PM
A read a few then this, it's made my brain get all 'ahhh' there are answers in there, I swears it!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 10/31/2023 12:48:00 PM
Between the highs and lows I believe balance finds a plateau, metaphorically and cosmologically speaking, cheers David
Date: 2/21/2023 5:33:00 PM
I love all ripples plateau! Great observation! Congratulations!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/25/2023 2:10:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim, sorry I missed your comment til now, cheers David
Date: 2/20/2023 4:02:00 PM
Oh very very nice, David :)
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/21/2023 5:09:00 AM
Heya Fin, thank you so much for stopping by with kind comment, cheers David
Date: 2/20/2023 4:02:00 PM
I really like this. Congrats on the win.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/21/2023 5:08:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, a little depth involved, cheers David
Date: 2/20/2023 1:47:00 AM
Great Monoku.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/20/2023 3:34:00 AM
Thank you Victor, highs and lows of life on balance a plateau, cheers David
Date: 2/19/2023 9:20:00 AM
Ebb and flow until they are no mo? Another depth chart write.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/19/2023 10:29:00 AM
Thank you Jenna I always try to depth charge my writes, you see this one exactly as intended, glad it didn’t go over your head, cheers David

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