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A Ripple To Me

go beyond high tide become overwhelmed in lows ~ all ripples plateau


A Ripple To Me 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: JCB Brul 
Howmanysyllables 17
02/19/23

Copyright © David Kavanagh | Year Posted 2023

allusionhow i feelperspectivemonoku

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February 21, 2023 at 5:33 PM

I love all ripples plateau! Great observation! Congratulations!

February 25, 2023 at 2:10 AM

Thank you so much Kim, sorry I missed your comment til now, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich

February 20, 2023 at 4:02 PM

I really like this. Congrats on the win.

February 21, 2023 at 5:08 AM

Thank you Andrea, a little depth involved, cheers David

February 20, 2023 at 4:02 PM

Oh very very nice, David :)

February 21, 2023 at 5:09 AM

Heya Fin, thank you so much for stopping by with kind comment, cheers David

Victor Buhagiar

February 20, 2023 at 1:47 AM

Great Monoku.

February 20, 2023 at 3:34 AM

Thank you Victor, highs and lows of life on balance a plateau, cheers David

February 19, 2023 at 9:20 AM

Ebb and flow until they are no mo? Another depth chart write.

February 19, 2023 at 10:29 AM

Thank you Jenna I always try to depth charge my writes, you see this one exactly as intended, glad it didn’t go over your head, cheers David

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