John Posey Poet Rhyme

A Ripple In Time

Crazy little ripple --
As it races down the stream
Reminds me of the one I love
Who races through my dreams.

Hurry little ripple!
Don't lose your course or speed.
Or you'll just lose direction --
Or simply cease to be.

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Poet Destroyer A May 18, 2013 at 9:08 PM a nice ripple in time winning poem... it was a joy coming back here to read all of Gail's winning poem... Always & Forever xox~ Linda John Posey May 19, 2013 at 1:37 AM Linda, sweetheart, your visits are a pure joy for me. Just know... I luv ya.... Jake

Skat A May 15, 2013 at 11:24 AM a nice A Ripple In time winning poem :-) Congrats *LUV ~SKAT~ John Posey May 15, 2013 at 12:37 PM Thanks SKAT... Your comments are always welcome.... Jake

Therese Bacha May 14, 2013 at 9:17 PM Congratulations John, as Donna wrote, it does sound like a song. So relaxing to the ears. Love it. Terry xoxo John Posey May 15, 2013 at 4:18 AM Thank you, Terry. Your comments are always so kind... I love ya..... Jake

Donna Jones May 14, 2013 at 7:20 PM Oh Jake I love the upbeat tempo of your poem...sounds like a happy little song...I think I'll go back and sing it! Congratulations! John Posey May 15, 2013 at 4:17 AM Thank you, Donna, This, as you might have guessed describes a ripple in a little brook or creek rather than a pond. I've seen many of these little streams in the mountains... Hugs to ya.... Jake