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A Ripple In Time

A ripple in time creased and folded like an origami pleated neatly in my heart 



Feb 19 2023 
A Ripple To Me 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: JCB Brul

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Vijay Pandit

February 20, 2023 at 8:59 AM

Wonderful simile--loved your photo and your thoughts.

Mystic Rose Rose

February 20, 2023 at 9:30 AM

Thankyou dear Vijay for your kind comment :)

Victor Buhagiar

February 20, 2023 at 1:27 AM

Splendid and original. Hugs.

Mystic Rose Rose

February 20, 2023 at 9:30 AM

Thank you dear Victor for stopping by, keep well

JC Brul

February 20, 2023 at 12:29 AM

This is very creative and emotive. Congratulations.

Mystic Rose Rose

February 20, 2023 at 9:30 AM

Thank you dear JC the heart is a power house but oh so fragile

Aysha Nuwas

February 19, 2023 at 9:42 PM

Beautiful and also wise words. Lovely

Mystic Rose Rose

February 20, 2023 at 9:29 AM

Glad to meet you Aysha, welcome to poetry soup if you are new, hope to read your poetry soon , Take care

Joanna Daniel

February 19, 2023 at 9:31 PM

Very nice, Vie:)

Mystic Rose Rose

February 20, 2023 at 9:29 AM

Thank you dear Jo, hope all is well, :)

Edward Ibeh

February 19, 2023 at 8:14 PM

What a beautiful monoku, Vienna:-)

Mystic Rose Rose

February 20, 2023 at 9:28 AM

Thank you Edward, hope your keeping well, thanks for the visit.

A Ripple In Time

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