A Ripple

life’s greatest tragedies often but a ripple on the pond of time

monoku
written for A Ripple To Me poetry contest
sponsored by JCB Brul
2/14/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 3:28 PM
oh yes, SO true. Big congrats. Can anyone even name a huge catastrophe of year 505, for example?
Tefft Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 7:49 AM
Thank you so much.
Alex Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 9:03 PM
Great comparison and metaphor. Congratulations!
Tefft Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 4:01 AM
Glad you like it. Thanks.
Agustin Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 7:55 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Tefft Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 7:23 AM
Thank you! And God bless you, as well.
Andresen Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 9:24 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest -
Tefft Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 10:05 AM
Thank you! There were so many good one's there. I'm glad I didn't have to judge.
Kauffman Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 9:20 AM
Congratulations on your win Stephen. Very poignant written in wonderful perspective. All the best.
Tefft Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 10:03 AM
Thank you! And to you as well.
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