A Ripple

life’s greatest tragedies often but a ripple on the pond of time monoku written for A Ripple To Me poetry contest sponsored by JCB Brul 2/14/2023

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2023 3:28:00 PM

oh yes, SO true. Big congrats. Can anyone even name a huge catastrophe of year 505, for example?

Stephen Tefft
Date: 2/22/2023 7:49:00 AM

Thank you so much.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/18/2023 9:03:00 PM

Great comparison and metaphor. Congratulations!

Stephen Tefft
Date: 2/19/2023 4:01:00 AM

Glad you like it. Thanks.

Beata Agustin

Date: 2/17/2023 7:55:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Stephen Tefft
Date: 2/18/2023 7:23:00 AM

Thank you! And God bless you, as well.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/17/2023 9:24:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest -

Stephen Tefft
Date: 2/17/2023 10:05:00 AM

Thank you! There were so many good one's there. I'm glad I didn't have to judge.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/17/2023 9:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Stephen. Very poignant written in wonderful perspective. All the best.

Stephen Tefft
Date: 2/17/2023 10:03:00 AM

Thank you! And to you as well.