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A Ripe Peach

Love is a ripe peach
It can be sweet and juicy
But can be the pits

Russell Sivey

Entrant into ~ SKAT ~'s "Define Love!" contest

9/1/2012

lifelovesenryu

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Lee Ramage

September 7, 2012 at 11:53 PM

Congratulations on your win. Sounds alot like my life... more pits than sweetness. ;) Lee

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

September 7, 2012 at 1:49 PM

A belated congrats on your win, Russell! Love your senryu!! Hugs, Rhonda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 6, 2012 at 8:49 AM

congrats Russell on a fantastic first place win defining love luv.. superb..

Gwendolen Song

September 6, 2012 at 6:26 AM

APPLAUSE!!! TAKE A BOW!! This is a great parallel to marriage...yep, watch out for those pits! I am trying to read til I reach the candy corn poem..how many more til I get to that candy corn? mmmmm gooood.