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A Rhyming Hurt

(22/11/2013)

You give me a long stare
Dig a big hollow then depart
Life has never been fair
Why has hurt always hugged 
my heart?

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Poet Destroyer A

February 18, 2016 at 11:57 AM

Dinda, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. LOVE LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

January 19, 2014 at 11:02 AM

This is really sweet and sincere. I love that line: why has hurt always hugged my heart? A really unique way to say it.

Joe Inka

December 6, 2013 at 2:05 AM

Heartfelt and honest rhymes are my favorite. I love the way you build your rhymes and glue them together with emotion. Awesome

Nette Onclaud

November 24, 2013 at 1:55 PM

ohh my, dinda... deeply moving in its reflective sway..:) wonderflu!.. huggs

Joseph Sergi

November 23, 2013 at 11:44 AM

a human emotion none of us like to feel very good poem

Skat A

November 22, 2013 at 12:27 PM

Dinda, ouch! The imagery of pain hugging me hurts... Enjoyed ~:) Hugs* SKAT

John Loving Iii

November 21, 2013 at 1:03 PM

some look for love and find an empty bag.

A Rhyming Hurt

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