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A Reverie

Let the time pass by In a sigh Let the candle gleam In a dream Let the heart go dance In a trance Let words embellish In a wish Let the soul sing first In a thirst Let the brown feet lope In a hope Let the bold eyes laze In a gaze Let the mind face death In a breath 08.21.2020
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Date: 8/25/2020 5:55:00 PM
Jo, I really like the rhymes and imagery. This poem offers some great surprises.
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Date: 8/25/2020 3:18:00 PM
Love this, Jo. WEll done.
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Date: 8/22/2020 11:26:00 AM
This has a jazziness that lifted my heart today.
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Date: 8/21/2020 11:48:00 AM
Wow! Well done!
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Date: 8/21/2020 4:54:00 AM
This is really awesome! Lovely flow and rhythm.
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