Joanna Daniel Poet Rhyme

A Reverie

Let the time pass by 
In a sigh

Let the candle gleam
In a dream 

Let the heart go dance 
In a trance 

Let words embellish
In a wish

Let the soul sing first 
In a thirst 

Let the brown feet lope 
In a hope 

Let the bold eyes laze
In a gaze

Let the mind face death 
In a breath



08.21.2020

(5.3 syllables)

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Mike Bayles August 25, 2020 at 5:55 PM Jo, I really like the rhymes and imagery. This poem offers some great surprises.

Andrea Dietrich August 25, 2020 at 3:18 PM Love this, Jo. WEll done.

Caren Krutsinger August 22, 2020 at 11:26 AM This has a jazziness that lifted my heart today.

Kim Rodrigues August 21, 2020 at 11:48 AM Wow! Well done!

Vijay Pandit August 21, 2020 at 4:54 AM This is really awesome! Lovely flow and rhythm.