Carol Mitra Poet Haiku

A Renewed Hope- El

A renewed hope in full bloom
From earths ear marked little corner
A bud has begun to bloom
Morning dew caressing petals
Rising to open fully
She dares to soak up the sun
A renewed hope in full bloom

8.7.2021

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Charles Messina July 31, 2021 at 6:35 AM Very nicely written, Carol. But your rhyme pattern was off or this would have placed higher. Congratulations on your win! Charlie Carol Mitra July 31, 2021 at 9:36 AM Thanks charles....now that you point it out....I see it, thanks :)

Christuraj Alex July 31, 2021 at 4:47 AM This is a very beautiful work. Congratulations on your placement! Carol Mitra July 31, 2021 at 5:03 AM Thanks Christuraj....I am glad you liked it :)

Sam Kauffman July 7, 2021 at 11:17 AM Lovely words of renewal Carol! Best wishes for the contest. Sending you blooms of blessings! Carol Mitra July 7, 2021 at 6:48 PM Thanks dear Sam....sending you some right back....much love :)

Mahtab Bangalee July 7, 2021 at 2:36 AM beautiful that is; innovative Carol Mitra July 7, 2021 at 3:41 AM Thank you Mahtab :)