Michael J. Falotico Poet Haiku

A Regret

~words of wisdom~




                                                          a regret can grow..


                                                like a tree that blocks your sight..


                                                       then you can't see past..

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Helen Forber March 10, 2011 at 3:01 PM Your poems are like the way I feel- simple and to the point. Very much appreciated Michael. Thank you for your own comment on my poem. Best wishes Hel x

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 6, 2011 at 9:12 AM Perfectly true Michael and perfectly written luv.. astounding your thoughts to paper this Sunday luv.. your Jersey Girl is overwhelmed by your talent .. forever and always..luv.

Carolyn Devonshire March 6, 2011 at 8:43 AM These regrets can leave us entombed in our own misery. Really like the tree analogy, Michael. Very nicely done! Love, Carolyn

James Tate March 6, 2011 at 7:46 AM Good philosophy here

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway March 6, 2011 at 6:30 AM Hey Michael, your words have so much insight into regret and how it can be blinding. How it alters our view of life in general. I love this and like many others I totally relate to it as well. Thank you for your kind words on my writes and blog... Miss reading your work...Lay

Andrea Dietrich March 5, 2011 at 10:27 PM oh,MY, this is SO wise. WAs it for any contest. I just love it!!

Dr.Ram Mehta March 5, 2011 at 6:34 PM beautiful thought defining regret with apt images, Michael

Ellen Fahey March 5, 2011 at 6:17 PM Very profound! Nice work! Ellen

Carrie Richards March 5, 2011 at 9:47 AM oh....so true, ......this one should be inside a fortune cookie as a reminder. Excellent and filled with wisdom!

Kabuteng P.Ink K. March 5, 2011 at 9:30 AM you sure speak of so much truth here, Michael-- I think I've grown such trees myself-- thanks for sharing this.... am just here :) --although popping up like a mushroom here and there ;)

Sara Kendrick March 5, 2011 at 9:12 AM Very good advice...Best to get an apology out there and put that regret behind.. When one has done what they can do.. They have done what they could to correct the past mistake then they don't have to live with regret....Sara

Wilma Neels March 5, 2011 at 8:55 AM Oh my word, did you just eavesdrop on my day? quite an interesting piece you have here, you wrote about the last couple of hours of my day lol, love Wilma