A Reader

he reads aloud
his voice clear and expressive - -
the book shakes *

*An observation at a writers’ group

For Susan’s senyru contest

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/3/2014 7:31:00 PM

very good! Light & Love congrad's

Skat A

Date: 2/26/2014 8:54:00 PM

Jack, , Congratulations!! Luv ~SKAT~

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/21/2014 11:37:00 AM

lol I know exactly what you mean Jack congrats on win hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/21/2014 10:19:00 AM

This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/21/2014 4:16:00 AM

Lovely imagery penned and congrats on the win, jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2014 10:21:00 PM

wow, jack and to think I never even read this one yet. It sure deserves being on the winner list. Congrats, my friend.

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 2/20/2014 7:36:00 PM

Jack great image. Congratulations on your win. Connie

Robert Johnson

Date: 1/19/2014 9:41:00 AM

We only see what we already know. Personal experiance is truly the show. Reflective insight with compassionate hearts. That's always the beginning of where love starts. Peace. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2014 9:47:00 AM

I like the observation... well done..Linda

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/12/2014 9:16:00 PM

Wow, this is an exceptional write my friend! I surely loved reading this lovely poem this evening! You have delighted me by the splendor of this creative piece! What an outstanding poem, Great Work!!

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/12/2014 9:00:00 PM

: ) Well done, Jack! I believe you've got another winner here! Public speaking and/or reading, doesn't come easy for me either. I can relate to this. xxAnnalise

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/12/2014 6:18:00 PM

I've been there with that shaking..Great work..Thanks for all the visits..I do have Crepe Myrtle but no Cacao Tree that are tropical and we are not that here..Sara