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A Rattling Rhyme

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In a blink of an eye a whole year can pass by- and the older I get, makes for sadder regret. Each new calendar page makes me think of my age- for so quickly each flies as I say my goodbyes. Winter turns into spring great to hear the birds sing. In haste, summer days call- then convert into fall. Why is that, I oft ask? I'm retired and should bask in my time stretching out with a slower phaseout! But, that isn't the case! Seems like life is a race- at once, start of each year ends with holiday cheer. Then, before me once more- with another encore- next year starts once again! Still- I'm thankful- AMEN! March 14, 2020 Meter Used: ta ta YA ta ta YA

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Date: 4/7/2020 4:52:00 PM
I enjoyed this wonderful poem. You captured how so many of us retired folk feel, while the fast rhythm is like time speeding by. Best to you, Sandra.
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Date: 3/28/2020 4:27:00 PM
I had to smile as I can relate to how time flies Sandra. Congratulations on your wonderful win! xxoo
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Date: 3/26/2020 11:08:00 PM
Really great write, Sandra, congratulations on your win in Nina's contest - blessings! :o)
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Date: 3/26/2020 4:59:00 PM
Ha! So much I can relate to in the "rattling rhyme", Sandra. Love how you made it rattle rapidly along, just like the days of the year! Congrats on another fine write.
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Date: 3/14/2020 12:40:00 PM
Hi Sandra: At my age, I can relate with your beautiful poem. I'm still in denial (ha ha)
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