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A Rattling Rhyme

In a blink of an eye
a whole year can pass by-
and the older I get,
makes for sadder regret.

Each new calendar page
makes me think of my age-
for so quickly each flies
as I say my goodbyes.

Winter turns into spring
great to hear the birds sing.
In haste, summer days call-
then convert into fall.

Why is that, I oft ask?
I'm retired and should bask
in my time stretching out
with a slower phaseout!

But, that isn't the case!
Seems like life is a race-
at once, start of each year
ends with holiday cheer.

Then, before me once more-
with another encore-
next year starts once again!
Still- I'm thankful- AMEN!


March 14, 2020

Meter Used: ta ta YA ta ta YA
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Cohen Avatar
April 7, 2020 at 4:52 PM
I enjoyed this wonderful poem. You captured how so many of us retired folk feel, while the fast rhythm is like time speeding by. Best to you, Sandra.
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 28, 2020 at 4:27 PM
I had to smile as I can relate to how time flies Sandra. Congratulations on your wonderful win! xxoo
Barden Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 11:08 PM
Really great write, Sandra, congratulations on your win in Nina's contest - blessings! :o)
Watt Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 4:59 PM
Ha! So much I can relate to in the "rattling rhyme", Sandra. Love how you made it rattle rapidly along, just like the days of the year! Congrats on another fine write.
Sergi Avatar
March 14, 2020 at 12:40 PM
Hi Sandra: At my age, I can relate with your beautiful poem. I'm still in denial (ha ha)
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