A Rapture Mind Cannot Capture

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Soma nectar fills all our voids within Our heart tranquil, in this benign bliss storm We feel the divine caress on our skin Soma nectar fills all our voids within Rapture renewal each moment begins We cognise in stillness, our pranic form Soma nectar fills all our voids within Our heart tranquil, in this benign bliss storm 04-June-2021

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/4/2021 5:52:00 PM

I'm with Victor. I too cannot meditate, but I appreciate your ability to write poetically on this way of bringing peace to our lives. Well done on your triolet.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/4/2021 7:45:00 PM

Open a soda bottle, watch bubbles rise, each bubble transiting, Andrea meditating!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/4/2021 7:59:00 AM

You have a marvelous gift, Unseeking Seeker. Thank you so much for using it as a guide for all of us here at PS.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/4/2021 8:19:00 AM

Thank you Milton! Yet, very few wish to change in thought & word & deed in lived reality.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/4/2021 5:54:00 AM

One thing I've never been able to do is meditate. So I must forget about the soma nectar. Otherwise a brilliant triolet.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/4/2021 7:22:00 AM

Lovers holding hands, a beauteous sunset, feet tapping to music, gush of joy, our here & now aliveness, chirping of birds, basically thought rested stillness allowing bliss to fill us.