Unseeking Seeker Poet Triolet

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A Rapture Mind Cannot Capture

Soma nectar fills all our voids within
Our heart tranquil, in this benign bliss storm
We feel the divine caress on our skin
Soma nectar fills all our voids within
Rapture renewal each moment begins
We cognise in stillness, our pranic form
Soma nectar fills all our voids within 
Our heart tranquil, in this benign bliss storm

04-June-2021

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Andrea Dietrich June 4, 2021 at 5:52 PM I'm with Victor. I too cannot meditate, but I appreciate your ability to write poetically on this way of bringing peace to our lives. Well done on your triolet. Unseeking Seeker June 4, 2021 at 7:45 PM Open a soda bottle, watch bubbles rise, each bubble transiting, Andrea meditating!

L Milton Hankins June 4, 2021 at 7:59 AM You have a marvelous gift, Unseeking Seeker. Thank you so much for using it as a guide for all of us here at PS. Unseeking Seeker June 4, 2021 at 8:19 AM Thank you Milton! Yet, very few wish to change in thought & word & deed in lived reality.

Victor Buhagiar June 4, 2021 at 5:54 AM One thing I've never been able to do is meditate. So I must forget about the soma nectar. Otherwise a brilliant triolet. Unseeking Seeker June 4, 2021 at 7:22 AM Lovers holding hands, a beauteous sunset, feet tapping to music, gush of joy, our here & now aliveness, chirping of birds, basically thought rested stillness allowing bliss to fill us.