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A Rainy Day Hoedown

It was raining outside our window And the kids were inside moping around That’s when the idea hit me To throw our first rainy day hoedown I kicked off my bedroom slippers Rolled up the legs to my long pants Went outside where they could see me And in the rain I started to dance They watched, laughing from the window Thinking Dad has finally lost his mind Then their mother came out to join me Splashing in the biggest puddle that we could find One by one they joined the hoedown As the rain continued to pour When the sun, at last, broke through the clouds They yelled, “Oh please, let it rain some more!” Cloudy days no longer bothered them As they journeyed into their adult life And we still have rainy day hoedowns With me do-si-do-ing with my wife NOTE: This poem was inspired by a Blog posted by Mustic Rose. Thanks M.R.

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Date: 1/11/2013 2:33:00 PM
great images of a lovely day with the family.. wonderful nararative
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Date: 1/10/2013 3:13:00 AM
yeehaa Joe love it... the word poem on two syll, counters is two syll, and on another it is only one syl, to me it is always two syll, that's why I said don't use them, the funny thing is when I posted the blog it was not your poem I meant but they put it right and then you posted yours, sorry for the delay in getting back to you Joe...David
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Date: 1/9/2013 5:17:00 PM
what a great idea! love it!
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Date: 1/9/2013 1:12:00 PM
i hope you have a fence.
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Date: 1/9/2013 10:00:00 AM
A delightful poem !! I can picture this !! Enjoyed !!!
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